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Perfect Your Query

with BARBARA KYLE
 bestselling author and book coach

Literary agents are gatekeepers. They open the doors to publishers for you – or the doors may stay closed.

To interest agents about your novel, you send them a query.

Agents receive dozens of queries every day. Most are poorly written and get rejected immediately.

With this expert coaching, you'll produce a concise, compelling query that will get agents excited about your book and eager to represent you to publishers.

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Expert Guidance


I’m your coach, Barbara Kyle, author of the bestselling Thornleigh Saga historical novels and acclaimed thrillers. Over half a million copies of my books have been sold worldwide.

As an author, I’m represented by Writers House, one of the world’s largest literary agencies.

As a book coach, I have helped hundreds of writers, and many have secured publishing contracts and become award-winning authors.

One-on-One Coaching


I'll review the query that you have prepared.

Then, in a live coaching session, I'll offer recommendations to make it the kind of query that captivates agents.

I'll also review your next draft to suggest final edits, if any are necessary. 

You'll finish with a query that can open the doors to agents and set you on the path to success.

Career Growth


Imagine winning representation by a top literary agent.

Imagine your agent landing a major publishing deal for your book.

That thrilling journey starts with your query.

Together, we'll get your query into top shape.

Who Is This Coaching For?

Anyone who has written a book, or is planning to, and seeks representation by an agent, the first step in achieving the goal of publication by a major publisher.

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What Does This Coaching Include?

 

You’ll get my expert guidance with:

  • My review and analysis of your query
  • A half-hour live coaching session in which I will:

          - give you my recommendations for edits

          - point out any blunders that can lead to rejection

         - answer any questions you might have

  • My review of your revised query, including further editing recommendations if any are necessary

PERFECT YOUR QUERY


$295

  • Expert review and analysis of your query

  • Live coaching session to discuss recommendations for edits

  • Review of your revised draft to suggest final edits, if any are necessary

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Barbara Kyle is the author of the bestselling Thornleigh Saga historical novels and acclaimed thrillers. Over half a million copies of her books have been sold worldwide. Her latest novel is The Deadly Trade. Barbara wrote the screenplay for the feature film Saving Dinah, available on Amazon Prime. Page-Turner is her popular "how-to" book for writers. As a book coach, Barbara has mentored hundreds of writers. Many of them have secured publishing contracts and become award-winning authors.